you have allergies, kinza? then just follow a few feet behind me! lol, was that question to me or our local effin star?
to you auslander, seriously man. your words elegamtly flow together while all of us here are typing away at our crap. *i had to edit this because it didn't flow* lol
well, thank you very much, kinza! i've thought about becoming a writer, and i am actually working on a novel. if you follow the second link in my sig, you'll be led to the first chapter of my book. tell me what you think.
it's only a very, very rough draft of a chapter, but if i turn it into a seller, any AD member who asks nicely can get a free copy! lol
Asmodeus, "A spirit originally viewed as king of the demons in Jewish demonology and later as a mischievous sprite". Remarkable work, well-suited title! How did you come to the title? I loved the story, emotions were bursting out from every word. I get frustrated knowing some American classics are so mundane and have no substance. Once authors get their penname their off into the world of money. Like renowned painters, they get a really good painting, then they draw a line and it sells for millions. You are an amazing writer, and trust me, I give constructive-criticism when it's needed. I was on a writing team in school and I know when there are exceptional writers. I don't mean to sound like a publisher or critic, BUT...writing is your thing....as well as being furry.
wow...if i've feel warm and fuzzy yet again! i got the title from my normal weird stuff. i'm interested in a variety of things, demonology being one of them. although i consider myself a good christian, i do love to read about the occult and other belief systems. Asmodeus fascinates me. as lucifer attempted to overthrow God, Asmodeus could have attempted to overthrow Lucifer. the only difference is that Asmodeus would have succeeded. as my story develops, the lead character will come very much to resemble Asmodeus, being a pain in the side to a large group of beings and breaking all the rules. i won't say yet which side he will fight on <edit> most of my characters, at least the important ones, will have demonic names corresponding to their personality and rank. the story is going to have a definite resemblane to the heavenly war that led to the separation of the skies and the creation of hell, except the players will be on different teams. here's to months of writing when i get the time to do it! </edit> you've gone and done it kinza...you've bribed your way into one of the first 5 copies of my book, one of only 5 to be signed
I'm sure it'll win awards. This is coming from someone who's really picky about books, and likes to criticize most of them.
lol, don't get carried away. that's all i have written at the moment. i had about 70 pages typed a few months ago, but i turned around for a total rewrite. the quality of my work there at the end was apalling and it had no substance or real plot. the story was becoming a fantasy world where everything was perfect and worked out nicely. that was not my intention. i'm hoping to write something the excite the reader. i want to stir true sadnes, ferocious anger, orgasmic joy, and solemn respect with a story of the fallen, the risen, and those in between.
hehee...just trying to bring you in on his perspective. the reader will come to understand that you could burn the character's home down and destroy everything, but it wouldn't even faze him as long as he had that ring....true importance will arise! XD
unless i get a few weeks where i do nothing, it won't be until about late December of this year :-( but i will do what i can on the weekends
Daniel- From the Hebrew name Daniyel meaning "God is my judge". Daniel was a Hebrew prophet whose story is told in the Book of Daniel in the Old Testament. He lived during the Jewish captivity in Babylon, where he served in the court of the king, rising to prominence by interpreting the king's dreams. The book also presents Daniel's four visions of the end of the world.
